Anthony: I liked how geography was portrayed in your essay. I also liked how you worded that failure was encouraged, just as long that someone was trying is all that matters. I enjoyed the positivity on succeeding with no limits.
Alexa: You are a great writer and I enjoyed reading your essay. I especially liked the background information on "Chewy", I think that's awesome!
Charlie: I couldn't agree more about the money and happiness. I'm friends with many starving musicians and I believe I'll be one before long too. :) You had great humor in your essay. The comparisons you made were a great way for someone to relate to America.
Sha: I really liked your intro paragraph; it was really catchy. You gave lots of thorough information throughout the entire essay.
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